Sorry, I expect to see clear shots while viewing photo's on Shutterbug. This need to be worked on, and in all honesty, if you have any questions on how to get a crystal clear shot, feel free to ask me. I share info with anyone that wants to know.
Focus is critial here, either you use an f2.8 or an f8 could be considered to render different background effect. Again, a more angle shot instead of a flat- on could have rendered more interest in the picture composition. Try again.